Students today can access information online so libraries are not necessary To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Students today can access information online, so libraries are not necessary.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is irrefutable to fact that digital library is most eminent in last two decades. Some people believe that students can acquire knowledge online, traditional libraries are unnecessary. I agree with this statement to a large extent as tutees can their quality time and they will get updated information from online.

To begin with, learners can easily retrieve information. As they will get a material using digital library, they can obtain data without travelling physical library. For instance, students use web browser to access information without commuting any place.In addition to this, it will dwindle the use of paper. According to recent research, two trees are used to produce 100 papers so trainees should use digital way to obtain data. Eventually, we can save environment by using less paper.

Moving further, scholar's can save their time. They have no leisure time to visit physically in library. As they will use digital sources to obtain information. Resultantly, they will get data within few seconds and save their quality time which use for other purposes. Moreover, kids will acquire updated knowledge. While using electronic gadgets, they can get upgraded study material from internet. To exemplify, most tutees access information by using YouTube web browser where data upgrading in every hours. So, why not students today receive data online if it reduce the use of paper?

However, i may not overlook other side too, traditional libraries helps to scholar's to focus on their study. They visit to library because they have need quite place where they would study without any distraction. To epitome, most University learners claim that they can get concentration in university library. What is more, digital assessing of data is require to pay some money. When tutees want to download full book from internet, it is possible by paying some amount of monetary resources. Consequently, it escalate financial burden on parents.

Recapitulate, undoubtedly, online access of data save their efforts as well as give upgraded information . Although libraries provide quite environment to students, yet they can save their quality time by assessing materials online.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 256, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...information without commuting any place.In addition to this, it will dwindle the u...
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Line 5, column 105, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...re time to visit physically in library. As they will use digital sources to obtain...
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Line 5, column 565, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'reduces'?
Suggestion: reduces
...tudents today receive data online if it reduce the use of paper? However, i may not...
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Line 7, column 10, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...it reduce the use of paper? However, i may not overlook other side too, tradit...
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Line 7, column 356, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'required'.
Suggestion: required
...t is more, digital assessing of data is require to pay some money. When tutees want to ...
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Line 7, column 364, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'paying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: paying
...e, digital assessing of data is require to pay some money. When tutees want to downloa...
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Line 7, column 514, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'escalates'?
Suggestion: escalates
...of monetary resources. Consequently, it escalate financial burden on parents. Recapit...
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Line 9, column 105, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...rts as well as give upgraded information . Although libraries provide quite enviro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, as well as, to begin with, what is more

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1852.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38372093023 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72432005549 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549418604651 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6152336566 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.1666666667 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3333333333 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.79166666667 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175945985149 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536019690969 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509620186095 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115156717738 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435320779198 0.056905535591 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.33 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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