Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems , as well as practical problems
Over the last few decades, peoples' life has become easier due to advancement in technology. Because today, individuals' can easily migrate from one country to another within a few hours. However, living in a new environment creates difficulties not only socially but also affects practically as well. Nevertheless, I partially agree with this statement and I discuss my reasons of partial agreement.
To commence with, although move to foreign country is not a difficult task nowadays because of progression in air transportation. But, mostly multitudes from another countries struggle to communicate with the others due to language barrier which is only affected socially but also practically they cannot get opportunity for occupation. For instance, mostly youngsters who accommodate to abroad to pursue their studies they come back after completing it. Because they are not as much fluent in contrast native speakers. Thus, they get less chance to get job.
On the other hand, every coin has two sides similarly stay in abroad also have benefits both socially and practically. First of all, masses' are much far from their hometown which helps them to become socially strong. Moreover, individuals' learn the real value of money by manage their all expenses and they also have to done their all tasks alone although they feel difficulty but they become independent. As a result, multitudes' learn to take decisions confidently.
In conclusion, although move to foreign nations affects the life socially and practically simultaneously. Because of language issues, it also has positive sides which are not neglected.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, similarly, so, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39130434783 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91975297377 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616600790514 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.7954307011 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9333333333 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8666666667 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142507650119 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465414661913 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050549465694 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933156414734 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284164783448 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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