Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Taking a lot of time to make an important decision is often viewed as a bad quality for a person to have, but, in fact, it is a good quality for a person to have. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is to be said that opportunities are for people who are ready, and I am a believer in this saying. It implies that opportunities do not always remain and most of them are transient. Therefore, I do not agree with this statement that taking a lot of time to make an important decision can be viewed as a positive quality. More reasons that I demur with it will be elaborated in the following.
As mentioned, opportunities tend to be transient and spending huge amount of time on considering it may simply result in the disappearing of them. Take myself as an example, I used to be a shy and introverted person that was afraid of accepting opportunities. There was once that when I got a job offer, I was too unsure and could not decide whether to take it or not, so I held it for a few weeks. But after I putted faith in myself and finalizes my decision, the offer has already been taken by other candidates. It turned out that the large amount of time I spent on considering actually only led to an adverse consequence.
What's more, it is also common that people incline to make the same decision as they first considered the options they got even though they spend lots of time on thinking of it. The first decision appears in one's head always seems to be the true thought from one's heart, and therefore spending excessive time would seem unwise and definitely a waste of time.
Some may argue that spending more time on an extremely important decision should be viewed as meticulous instead of procrastination. Although it is true that thinking thoroughly should be considered as carefulness, but it would also bring inconvenience to others. Especially when others are waiting for the single person so that they can proceed to the next step. It seems to be a routine that while a team project is stuck due to one of the team member is vacillating on a certain content, others will not view him/her as meticulous but the one who delay their schedule.
To sum up, it is reasonable for people to spend some time on important decisions, but it will also lead to the disappearing of opportunities and the inconveniences to others as well. Therefore, I cannot consider spending excessive time on making decision a good quality as whole.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, may, so, therefore, well, while, as to, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 399.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61904761905 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85235055155 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496240601504 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 599.4 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1067850239 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.411764706 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4705882353 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23529411765 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230394529962 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766522481828 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719747562272 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135235617238 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559061441263 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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