In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those crimes
It is well known that the amount of crime is increasing in many countries. This trend is driven by many factors, and some viable solutions can be implemented to boost the awareness of people in order to prevent crimes.
There are numerous reasons for this. To begin with, most crimes are motivated by poverty.The cost of living is much higher in this life, while salaries remain constant.As a result, many people are unable to cover their expenses and are forced to commit crimes, ranging from minor ones like pickpocketing to more serious ones like murder, in order to earn money.Secondly, the one who has unresolved traumatic experiences, including being bullied or having a violent family, is a potential criminal. This is understandable that children tend to be influenced by the behaves of people surrounding them. Because of this, if they grow up with violent, aggressive, and fierce people, they are more likely to commit crimes.
In order to address the aforementioned issues, governments should promote education, which is one of the best ways to raise people's awareness. In addition, the governments also need to encourage their folks not to have children if they are not able to fulfill all the needs of their children. Moreover, they should invest more money to help the poor including building social house, charity food and money fot them.
In conclusion, the reasons for the trend that crimes are increasing are poverty and violence, and the government should invest more in education and social activities to tackle these problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12992125984 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79852589116 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59842519685 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.985680886 49.4020404114 223% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 130.3 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119743104951 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056961800627 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0918939118254 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.093025865397 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073019077357 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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