The media is increasing interest in famous people who have ordinary backgrounds. Why do you think people are interested in the lives of famous people? Do you think is good thing?
The well-known individuals having common backgrounds attract the media to enshroud them. There are some causes why this happens and I believe this would bring benefit in people’s life.
On the one hand, the reason why many media motivated to follow celebrities having common backgrounds is because people feel curious about why they could be successful. So, individuals could learn and imitate how the public figure utilize their precious time in order that they can be more productive. A good illustration of this is in the past, Ronaldo was born in the low-income home and had a big goal to play professional football. Due to his efforts, his dream has finally come true. Furthermore, these days, a lot of well-known people are successful, yet their life before becoming wealthy individuals was surely unfortunate. So, people become interested in their history and life story, which makes media outlets want to interview them. For example, a platform telling about a businessman who only markets his items in a small area could sell the goods to other nations afterwards and make a significant profit. This is able to be the life story of inspiration for others. Besides that, the media would be often looked at people because many stories of life influence others.
On the other hand, in my opinion, I agree with what the media does because famous people can share a positive impact on people’s life. From successful people, common people may be able to learn a variety of important lessons. For instance, when the media focuses on a public figure, society can learn how they manage their time and how to increase their productivity to succeed, thus that is a significant opportunity for individuals to learn life skills.
To conclude, the causes of the media become interested in ordinary people being successful individuals because of the history of life and hard work. Besides that, their life can influence many people to be a success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1004, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[8]
Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put between 'would' and 'be'.
Suggestion: would often be
...ion for others. Besides that, the media would be often looked at people because many stories o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, furthermore, if, look, may, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05882352941 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72407469859 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2589338556 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.125 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1875 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216391149961 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783547925498 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616503756543 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149371919088 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.011484729464 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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