A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.
There is a large community of people who believes that animals don’t have to be suffered from individuals and deserve a better life like humans. In contrast, some people contend that animals should be used for service, scientific samples, or to entertain humans. However, I agree that animals need to be protected and treated like humans.
On the one hand, people think that humans should not be exploited because they are living creatures like humans. Although animals are inferior to humans, they have their own life, community, and feeling like human beings. So it’s true that animals need to be treated better. In some cases, it is reported that some of the elephants were angry and yelled after they had seen their allies dead by humans. In another case, some animals like lions protected their children while they were being hunted or attacked, just like human nature.
On the other hand, it is undeniable that animals must be employed to satisfy human needs. First of all, the animal is a source of food and products for humans. For millions of years, humans slaughtered animals for food to survive the starving. Now, they use animals like buffalos, cows for agriculture, and some cattle animals like chickens and sheep are slaughtered for their meat or milk. That means without animals, there will be a lack of food supplies and humans will die from starvation. Secondly, hamsters and sheep are used as the subject of experiments for science, and the success of the Dolly the sheep experiment is an example. She was the first animal to be cloned from an adult cell and her appearance became the turning point of cell technology.
In conclusion, each people have an opinion about the exploitation of animals. I think we should exploit animals for necessary things such as food supplies, or science stuff. Also, animals have to be treated as living creatures like humans on Earth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, i think, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, first of all, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.925 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43977457975 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515625 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.80665166 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.5555555556 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.440764082209 0.244688304435 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15633269326 0.084324248473 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713412803618 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.285091167107 0.151304729494 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207217487789 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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