The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
The bar chart illustrates a survey's result about purchasing and drinking habits of coffee and Tea by people in five Australian cities.
Overall, the people went to cafe for coffee or tea in last 4 weeks dominates the fresh and instant coffee bought rate in five cities. While, the percentage of residents bought instant coffee remains relativity same throughout in all the cities. However, fresh coffee consumption is less popular in all cities of Australia in a month.
The biggest consumption of tea and coffee are made by three cities namely Sydney Melbourne, Hobart. In these cities of Australia higher percent of people went to cafe in a month as just above 60% in Sydney nearby 65% in Melbourne and Hobart both. In this case, there is only 5% difference of visitors in cafe in Brisbane and Adelaide as well above 55% and just below 50% respectively.
On the other hand, the percentage of residence who buy instant coffee goes up in Sydney, Melbourne and Brisbane from 45% to approximately 55%. But drops in Adelaide and then go higher in Hobart and becomes equals to the proportion of other cities. The percentage of fresh coffee bought by people fluctuated in all the cities. Despite, this is Sydney and Melbourne shows around 40% of intake more than remaining three cities. Brisbane and Adelaide are relatively similar where only 35% of residents bought fresh coffee in last week.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, then, well, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1162.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 236.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92372881356 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59087908048 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508474576271 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 358.2 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.9139732185 43.030603864 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.8333333333 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306031632443 0.215688989381 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114033969345 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148664259092 0.0843802449381 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237906389418 0.15604864568 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.200167115101 0.0819641961636 244% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.