You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken.
Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter:
Describe the problem with the equipment
Explain what happened when you phoned the shop
Say what you would like the manager to do
Dear sir/ madam,
My name is Rahul and I bought a sandwich maker from your shop, that is situated in Whitefield market. After a week of buying this machine it has stopped heating and I am not able to make any bread out of it.
In this regard, I dialed to the customer care number given on box on December 25, 2022. I explained the problem to customer care executive and he registered my complain and assured me to get back in 24 hours. I did not get any response even after a day and I had to call again but no action taken yet, hence, I am writing directly to you.
Here, I would like you to look into this matter and take corrective measures. I want my sandwich maker to be replaced with the new one, as it is in warranty. I have enclosed copy of bill along this letter. Also, if you could talk to your service executives and ask them to be responsible towards the customer's complains would be food. As, it was a very unpleasant experience of me with them.
Looking forward to seeing prompt action.
Thank you!
Your faithfully,
Raghav.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-08-10 | ECOOOOOST | 73 | view |
| 2022-12-31 | lokeshpareek87 | 73 | view |
| 2022-12-31 | lokeshpareek87 | 73 | view |
| 2022-12-31 | lokeshpareek87 | 73 | view |
| 2022-12-31 | lokeshpareek87 | 73 | view |
- You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture Write a letter to the landlord In your letter Introduce yourself Explain what is wrong with the furnitu 81
- You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work You phoned the shop but no action was taken Write a letter to the shop manager In your letter Describe the problem with the equipment Explain what happened when you phoned the s 73
- It is often thought that the increase in juvenile crime can be attributed to violence in the media Do you think it is the reason for the growth in the rate of juvenile crime What solutions can you offer to deal with this situation 78
- You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work You phoned the shop but no action was taken Write a letter to the shop manager In your letter Describe the problem with the equipment Explain what happened when you phoned the s 73
- You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six year old child Write a letter to the parents In your letter explain why you would like the job give details of why you would 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 336, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... the customers complains would be food. As, it was a very unpleasant experience of...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 865.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41326530612 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42296450165 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673469387755 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2047520026 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0833333333 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21193072029 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686814208298 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568326920814 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0892712487598 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037451543919 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.