These days it is much easier for many people to travel to different countries for tourism than in the past.
Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, travelling to various countries is became much easier for travel lover than in the past. While there are some drawbacks associated with going travel by simple ways, I believe main benefits are more substantial.
On the one hand, a potential disadvantage may be suffering from seasonal depression in tourism destinations. Today, people, by and large, find it easy to go and spend leisure time in countries by high-tech means of transport, plane, for instance. Since they are transformed fast into various cities among the globe, they find it difficult to adapted to climate changes. A further perceived negative is that passengers have struggled with language barrier. It can bring about a number of difficulties for them in abroad. A friend of mine who just knew few words in English ran into problems when he explained a hotel address for a taxi driver in Canada. If he learned English well, he would be able to address his issue.
On the other hand, a primary advantage of going easily to tourism destination is becoming more and more familiar with a wide range of cultures. Many tourists have benefited from improving interpersonal skills during travel. Therefore, meeting people from different cultures and countries broaden the horizon of travelers. From statistical point of view, several explorers benefit from culture exchange. I, personally, know a few friend who have learned to cook delicious Indian meals by travelling to India. Another benefit is that governments are able to invest much money which are earned from travelers in diverse ways. Thus, the government should plan for developing recreational areas in order to gravity more visitors.
In conclusion, it is true that going on a trip around the world was much harder than now would seem disadvantageous under certain circumstances. However, in my opinion, its positive effects in term of recognizing new culture and allocation much budget by the government from tourist override the disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: become
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Message: Did you mean 'new'?
Suggestion: new
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun friend seems to be countable; consider using: 'few friends'.
Suggestion: few friends
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, by and large, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25471698113 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89329538451 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64465408805 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.6932603113 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.8333333333 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72222222222 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24729973694 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685393865448 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806104467564 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144341764596 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654105593448 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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