Some people feel that individual should try to assimilate completely to the country where they live, while others feel it more important to perseve their native culture. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, many people claim that it is essential to keep individual's own culture, meanwhile, others feel that they should respect to the country which they reside in. Both of views appear on two arguments, however, which I will explain in the following paragraph.
On the one hand, debaters of culture which should be conserved by individuals cite that the traditional customs in not only legacy but also essential things which would be irreplaceable. For example, several people could apply their own accent or wear traditional outfit in the number of event (local festival). Moreover, the culture has to be inherited to next generation and native inhabitants should be proud of their own identity rather than other cultures. Apparently, teaching children about traditional art and also accompany them go to historical sites provide the best way to introduce the variety of cultures.
On the other hand, supporters of this perspective highlight that individuals must be able to adapt in several culture of other countries since this could be a positive example of social interaction. To exemplify, to be an immigrant should familiarize themselves when they face new culture and understand specific norms and values of different culture. Furthermore, new insight and detail information from each countries lead the settlers to greater cultural perspective, such as the result of manners which have learned by individuals. Perhaps, this should be shared to common people in order to obtain new customs and traditions (table manners)
In conclusion, in my opinion, non- native people should be sociable when setting in overseas, including how to socialize and receive different culture. This is as long as individuals are willing for preserving their own legacy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 103, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun culture seems to be countable; consider using: 'several cultures'.
Suggestion: several cultures
...at individuals must be able to adapt in several culture of other countries since this could be ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37545126354 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.882440329 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606498194946 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.645453696 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.363636364 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1818181818 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.2727272727 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21307910015 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811269620077 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545804823256 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139392409971 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443233481763 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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