Some people say that now is the best time in history to be living.
What is your opinion about this?
What other time in history would be interesting to live in?
It is argued by a few that despite all its challenges, the contemporary age is the ideal moment to be alive. My thoughts are aligned with this assertion because of the advancements in the medical field that contributed to our longevity. On the other hand, although humanity has been making significant breakthroughs, the distant future, when we can explore deep space more accurately, would be an intriguing time for living.
In the past centuries, people were falling ill, and there was no cure. Moreover, the source of many infectious diseases was unknown. However, with the invention of new treatment methods in the late 17th century, owing to scientists who dedicated their lives to developing new vaccines, life expectancy has dramatically improved today. Therefore, the current era is the most precious piece of history residing in. For example, in 2019, after the covid-19 outbreak, vaccine developers developed the vaccine in less than a year, which saved billions of lives. Though we lost millions, the losses would have amounted to 10 times greater if such a pandemic had happened in the past.
Throughout history, ordinary people, more specifically, astrophysicists, have always been interested in our origins and have put forward numerous theories explaining how this universe has evolved. A few examples include string theory, wormholes, and parallel worlds. Alongside mainstream scientists, many ancient tales claim our ancestors came from other galaxies out of our planetary system. One of these stories belongs to a civilization known as the Incas that lived where now is South America. In the future, when we can explore the credibility of these hypotheses and theories, there will be a fascinating age in which we can interact with creatures that might have created us.
To conclude, I believe the present is the best time for living due to achievements in medication that have expanded our lifespan. Furthermore, the far future, when humans will be able to travel at the speed of light and discover outer space, will be the perfect place to live.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ce, will be the perfect place to live.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23053892216 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87492662979 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.667664670659 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7946268402 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.1875 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204715202102 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527154957243 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429924573736 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119291532758 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427750195104 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.