Music
Music has fantastic vibes that make people calm. It provides that listening to music can diminish anxiety, blood pressure, and pain as well as improve sleep quality, mood, and memory. People listen to music for the reasons below.
Fundamentally, not only is it clear that music causes palliation, but also most of the people use it for patients. For instance, in the past, there was a guy who had a mental problem, and suddenly he went into shock and started to scream. After a while, the doctor figured out his favorite music from his childhood, and whenever he got angry, they played the music and he calmed down. The doctors were astonished that Musik had done something that dozens of other doctors could not do.
Whereas, whenever people are in a blue mood, they come to music. It is not important how your mood makes you smooth. People listen to music during the work, during the cook, during the study, notably when you are not in mood. For instance, some time ago, it was fashionable for people to post, “Please inject music into my veins.” Music has the ability to deeply affect our mental states and raise our mood. When we need it, music gives us energy and motivation. When we’re worried, it can soothe us; when we’re weary, it can encourage us; and when we’re feeling deflated, it can re-inspire us. Music has also been linked to dopamine release, which is involved in regulating mood and craving behavior, which seems to predict music’s ability to bring us pleasure.
All in all, all of us know that music is a part of our lives. Its not important that what is your mood just you listen to it whether you understand each single of music or not. i suggest that always listen to music, it helps you to continue your life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, whereas, while, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 312.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67628205128 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32151973833 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560897435897 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.123499349 48.9658058833 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.583333333 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.455511620871 0.236089414692 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180246511726 0.076458572812 236% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128831081356 0.0737576698707 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.30911532133 0.150856017488 205% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490322107527 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.