Most people do not care enough about environmental issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is believed that most civilians do not have enough care about environmental problems. From my perspective, I disagree with this statement because the number of those people who do not take care of the environment is not mentioned.
First and foremost, environmental sciences are being developed in this era. Technologies which use to enhance the environment are becoming more modern and widespread all over the world. Besides, inventions that serve human’s daily life are getting more friendly to the environment, which is becoming well-known and widely used. Investigations about environmental issues are being taken by scientists, and as the result, people could deal with many environmental problems. For example, there are a great number of organizations in the world that were established for environmental purposes, and as the result, environmental issues are taken care of carefully.
In addition, global warming is the most important issue, which can have negative effects on human beings’ habitats. For that reason, many countries are doing their best to encourage their population to protect the environment, moreover, the governments set out many policies for environmental protection part. Environmental organizations operated a large number of campaigns to pursue individuals to protect the environment. Take education as an example, students get used to environmental subjects in school. Not only provides pupils with real experience but also let them have deep knowledge about environmental problems.
All things considered, environmental issues are the most attractive part to individuals this day. In this case, having a good sight of the environment’s protection is leading people to happier lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 96, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...veloped in this era. Technologies which use to enhance the environment are becoming...
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Line 4, column 348, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...t. Environmental organizations operated a large number of campaigns to pursue individuals to prot...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, moreover, so, well, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69884169884 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28723156852 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579150579151 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.472482371 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.428571429 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339339818521 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118420926147 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0984341135715 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236418049556 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129069467487 0.056905535591 227% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.78 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.