Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
After graduating from university, some professionals like doctors and engineers are forced to stay in the country where they did their training for working, the others believe that they are free to make the decision where they will work even in another country. I would argue that people with professional knowledge must have the right to choose their working places.
There are several reasons why doctors and engineers should practice their jobs in their training country. All students must spend at least 3 years in university, they are accustomed to the environment work and way to live so they can develop their best abilities, reach shining results. Besides, working for their countryside is the best way to express their gratitude. With numerous expertise, professionals not only can bring a lot of profits to enhance the national finance but also attract more people to come to our home and promote residents’ living standards.
On the other hand, I believed that it is more reasonable for every specialist to be free in choosing where they are devoted. First, people who have professional knowledge can choose a suitable working environment or well-paid jobs. A high salary helps them afford every goods or service they want and a suitable working environment gives them a comfortable feeling to do their best. Moreover, working in another country give specialists an opportunity to gain new knowledge about their specialization. For example, many undergraduate students decide to work abroad after graduating, they do a lot of research, acquire a new humanity development, cooperate with the gifted person and consequently have a lot of achievements.
To sum up, while it is apparent that professionals should do their best in the country where they are trained, it is undeniable that they have a right to be free in choosing a workplace.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, so, well, while, at least, for example, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16611295681 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93004798237 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541528239203 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.2791391322 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.583333333 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0833333333 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.45026009633 0.244688304435 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165488042331 0.084324248473 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112406670828 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.304510897131 0.151304729494 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0858825316431 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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