Young people learn good behavior more from movies and books than real-life experiences. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Education is always one of the top priorities among nations around the world. While it is argued that films and books are a better approach for the young to shape their behaviors as well as integrate knowledge than learning them on their own. From my perspective, I completely disagree with this statement since books and movies are often focusing on different characters, including villains. Therefore, getting knowledge through experiences and reality is more impactful.
To begin with, it cannot deny that books and movies are flawless and precious sources to get access to a wealth of knowledge and information. However, films are not the best method for young people to form good behaviors as there are still numerous negative role models that may influence the development of children. To be more specific, those characters are often built in a way of excessively idealized or exaggerated to appeal audiences. Therefore, they often possess a set of behaviors that are regarded as immoral and violent in reality. For instance, Joker in the movie with the same name is typically considered one of the evilest villains and has an aggressive personality. Nonetheless, this figure was admired by numerous youngsters, thereby becoming a global phenomenon during a certain period. As a result, many tend to imitate his actions with the aim of being heroes in real life without realizing those actions are serious and may lead to severe consequences for innocent people.
Another reason why I disagree is that people have a strong emotional reaction to real experiences. By that I mean, they are able to learn from real experiences in order to broaden their horizon with ease. First and foremost, netizens can make sense of remembering vividly, and easily reflect those in their minds. In fact, if they behave in a proper manner, they would be criticized by other people. Accordingly, they might acknowledge and analyze their manner and definitely try to avoid the same mistake in the foreseeable future. In addition, it is scientifically proven that knowledge is stored much longer if people experience it on their own due to the combination of senses. Furthermore, this is because kids will be learning behavior in areas that they need whereas books and movies might be showing behaviour in contexts and are not relevant to them.
In conclusion, although movies and books are also good ways for children to get information, characters are often presented with violent behaviors, and learning through experiences is more effective to control attitudes. Therefore, parents should try to optimize the experiences that their children have so that they can develop into moral citizens.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 339, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a proper manner" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...in their minds. In fact, if they behave in a proper manner, they would be criticized by other peop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, furthermore, however, if, may, nonetheless, so, still, therefore, well, whereas, while, for instance, i mean, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2258.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 434.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20276497696 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84118107154 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 176.041082164 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559907834101 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 712.8 506.74238477 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4738575543 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.9 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.55 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25351282363 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665131887903 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550644357506 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155318024842 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293930195956 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 339, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a proper manner" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...in their minds. In fact, if they behave in a proper manner, they would be criticized by other peop...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, furthermore, however, if, may, nonetheless, so, still, therefore, well, whereas, while, for instance, i mean, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2258.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 434.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20276497696 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84118107154 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 176.041082164 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559907834101 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 712.8 506.74238477 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4738575543 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.9 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.55 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25351282363 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665131887903 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550644357506 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155318024842 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293930195956 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.