It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?
It is perceived by many that it is crucial for people to taking risks in their professional lives as well as personal one. The merits and demerits of the issue will be fully analyzed and discussed in this essay.
With regard to the positiveness of the issue, there are a wide range of benefits of taking risk, one of which is successfulness. Indeed, taking risks means that you make a decision which can lead you to be happiness because you succeed or sorrow if you fail in doing something. For instance, when a businessman makes a decision to invest money in a field such as running a restaurant, we can say that he is taking a risk. In other words, he faces to a situation that his restaurant can bring more income or he can lose all things what he has invested. If he manages it well, he can become richer. The other point which also needs to be concerned is that people can develop themselves through finding way how to tackle difficult circumtances such as how to solve the problems which might happen in their lives. As a result, their ability to deal with challenges will increase significantly.
Aside from the aforementioned merits, the main demerit of the problem is potential failures. Hardly can anyone deny that making a decision maybe lead people to bankruptcy. In fact, if people are lack of experience to scope with the troubles that might exist in their lives. This will lead to the fact that they cannot manage situations well and lost money. For example, a man who runs a restaurant can become bankrupt if his business does not go well as he expected. As a result, he might lose all money because of his bad decision. What is more, failure can make people sorrow and lost confident on themselves because they do not believe in themselves any more due to bad decisions which they made in the past.
In conclusion, it is too much to cover all benefits and drawbacks of taking risks, so aforementioned analysis in this essay are main ideals that raise concern. All though taking risk can bring some disadvantages, I hold a belief that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 161, Rule ID: ALLTHOUGH[2]
Message: Did you mean 'although'?
Suggestion: Although
...say are main ideals that raise concern. All though taking risk can bring some disadvantage...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words, what is more, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1734.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67385444744 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71953897055 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520215633423 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0869673849 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3333333333 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6111111111 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.55555555556 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250774156758 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808264519618 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113031980855 0.0667982634062 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179129475041 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0956322316374 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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