Some people believe that the salaries paid to professional sportspeople are too high, while others argue that sports salaries are fair. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
it is true that whether the incomes of fulltime athletes are overpaid or those earnings are acceptable balance is a subject of debate. While reasons can be given to justify the former, the latter is much more preferable.
On the one hand, the idea that top athlete’s incomes are unfairly high that is beneficial in some ways. Firstly, comparing with workers in other careers like doctors or teachers, the payments that sports players earn are extremely higher although medical and education are more essential for human society. Secondly, the trade-off for getting paid is also unfair due to the fact that athletes have to pay far less effort than other professions such as doctors and engineers. For example, doctors and nurses have to stay up all night for their shift and always pay all their physical and mental health for saving patients life. Finally, in football industry, there are cases that the incomes of top players are inflated as their values are raised on the transfer market by the football clubs.
On the other hand, other would argue that the earning of elite sports athletes are reasonable and acceptable. The first prominent justification is that professional athletes also spent years of hardships training which means that their incomes is well worth for what they have to go through. Furthermore, famous sportsman and sportswoman fairly earn money though commercial value owning the fact that they can collaborate with production companies and using their brand recognitions to attract customers. In addition, it can be denied that world-class players are deserved high payments as they could bring glory to their own country by winning the global competitions like Olympic event or world cup. For instance, Lionel Messi is one of the highest-paid football players because of his exceptional performance that bring a lot of tittles for his country Argentina, especially the champion of world cup 2023.
In conclusion, for the reasons mentions above, although the incomes of elite athletes are overpaid, it seems evident that the earnings of professional sports players are worthy and reasonable.
- Schools should encourage children to eat healthy food while others say that parents should teach them about having a healthy diet Discuss both views and give your opinion 61
- Public transport should be funded by the government so that it can be free for people who use it To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Some people think that the best way to get the news is through newspapers while others think it is through online media Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- Some people believe that the salaries paid to professional sportspeople are too high while others argue that sports salaries are fair Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
- Children are now less active in their free time than in the past Therefore sports lessons must be compulsory in schools To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
it is true that whether the incomes of ful...
^^
Line 3, column 613, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'patients'' or 'patient's'?
Suggestion: patients'; patient's
...r physical and mental health for saving patients life. Finally, in football industry, th...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1788.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22807017544 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66626266561 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558479532164 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.6324264946 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.538461538 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3076923077 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5384615385 7.06120827912 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0872970977562 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361564809204 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357740470713 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0517150527996 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0190718169762 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.