Some people think that young people should follow the traditions of the society. Others think young people are free to behave as individuals. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The topic of which lifestyle that the young nowadays should follow has been attracting the public. There is a part of the society holding the belief that youngsters need to keep themselves within a safe zone that is acceptable by the former generations. However, others think that young people are totally accepted to do everything on their own. This essay aims to express the opinion on each viewpoint and give a personal perspective.
First of all, it cannot be denied that the young generation has the right to express their viewpoints on any topics as other generations do. In fact, young people who are confident and do not hesitate to speak out what they think can be considered as a great inspirational source for other people not only people who are at the same age but others at all ages as well. For instance, the keywords or hashtags recently on social media related to “Gen Z” have been a key term that has been looked at by everyone. Indeed, even though not all the contents posted with this keyword are delivered in a positive way, it can still be an aspect for people to be inspired or to figure out the differences between the various generations over the time. Other than that, due to globalisation when all the countries in the world tend to reach the sustainable development goals, cooperation and integration are key factors to succeed. Therefore, the young, especially Gen Z, is an important factor that can be the most potential and powerful standing for the whole nation.
However, there can be some “side effects” if youngsters become overconfident and have a tendency to ignore traditional values. This is understandable since the young these days has been exposed to a huge source of knowledge and they are in a much better life condition than the others. Otherwise, they seem to lack the experience in life that may lead to misbehaving. In fact, paying too much attention to how to be confident or how to be different in a community results in youngsters’ misled attitude and behaviours. Thus, spending time on learning about the past and about their countries’ culture, as well as their habits and customs is necessary to find out for themselves and be more grateful towards what they were given.
To sum up, it has always been good for the young to be independent and individually successful in their paths. However, the traditional values are still the crucial factors to be paid more attention to and it can be even more helpful for the youngsters to show their power and nationalism to other people from different countries. That is the reason why being consistent with learning as well as being grateful and respecting the traditions will never be neglected by anyone.
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Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, may, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in fact, as well as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 34.0 13.1623246493 258% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2260.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 465.0 315.596192385 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86021505376 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77917698602 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524731182796 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 692.1 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.3586727939 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.555555556 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209254813698 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692740481712 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841854799276 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141731081706 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0873709283589 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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