When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people think that the most important factor when selecting a job is the salary. From my perspective, I partly agree with this opinion. Although money can help people make ends meet, choosing a suitable work environment is also significant.
The reason why people usually take money into consideration when they choose an occupation is that it helps them on a daily basis. Obviously, people tend to choose a company paying them higher wages because earning a lot of money can help them live better. There are many expenses in life that need to be paid, such as rent, utility bills, insurance, or even tuition fees for their children. For instance, a person who is paid 1000$ in a month will be happier than a man who is just paid 800$ because he has enough money to make a living. As a result, people will feel more comfortable and life will be easier when they have plenty of money.
Nevertheless, there is still a factor that is also worth-considering when choosing a job, this is the work environment. To be more specific, working in an appropriate environment is a good choice for individuals to develop their working skills. A comfortable workplace can help people release stress, feel happier and full of energy when working. Hence, people will improve their mental health and achieve high work efficiency. For example, a person working in a less pressure environment can easily reach the goal and rarely be depressed.
To sum up, in my opinion, money can be the first priority for people when choosing an occupation because it is necessary in daily life but it is not the only factor. Another essential factor that people should consider is the appropriate work environment.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 428, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$1000'.
Suggestion: $1000
...ren. For instance, a person who is paid 1000$ in a month will be happier than a man w...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 489, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$800'.
Suggestion: $800
... be happier than a man who is just paid 800$ because he has enough money to make a l...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, nevertheless, so, still, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87543252595 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75783105292 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553633217993 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2717418733 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.642857143 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1177288837 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511705171259 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616645986933 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0865703352282 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049575620783 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 428, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$1000'.
Suggestion: $1000
...ren. For instance, a person who is paid 1000$ in a month will be happier than a man w...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 489, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$800'.
Suggestion: $800
... be happier than a man who is just paid 800$ because he has enough money to make a l...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, nevertheless, so, still, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87543252595 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75783105292 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553633217993 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2717418733 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.642857143 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1177288837 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511705171259 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616645986933 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0865703352282 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049575620783 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.