More and more people today are choosing to eat only healthy food and are making time
to exercise regularly. Why is this? What can be done to encourage other people to eat
only healthy food and to make time to exercise regularly?
It has become increasingly common for people to have a healthy diet and do exercises on a daily basis. This stem from the fact that people now pay more attention about their health, and governmental bodies could enforce policies that give their citizens incentives to maintain a healthy lifestyle.
People from all ages are increasingly being concern about their health. This is mainly due to a rise in the obesity rate around the world, which leads to higher risk of health problems. A pertinent example of this is that obesity creates heart diseases and put people in jeopardy of having heart attacks. As a result, overweigh resulting from an unhealthy and sedentary lifestyle can cause the mortality rate to climb.
To ameliorate the aforementioned issue, governments should release different policies to encourage the citizens to have a healthy lifestyle. They could release policies that support farmers so that the cost for green ingredients could be less expensive. Organic food, for instance, are relatively costly in many countries, which creates barriers for the underprivileged to purchase those kinds of products. Consequently, people who are uncapable of paying for green food will have to resort to fast food to keep them away from starving. If the authorities could make interventions to lower the cost of those products, more people will have a more healthy diet, and since they are not overweigh, which makes them tired to do exercises, they would work out more.
In conclusion, an increasing number of people are eating healthier and do more exercises because they are more concerned about their health, and the governments could enforce certain policies to motivates more people to follow a healthy lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21505376344 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79420049909 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551971326165 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2938586929 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.25 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25664165124 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899143387006 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691354639203 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164979868462 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588041285936 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.