In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that is the government’s responsibility. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, it is increasingly common for children to suffer from obesity and unhealthy lifestyle. People have different views on whether governments should take responsibility for this practice or not. In my opinion, it is reasonable for the government to take charge of this phenomenon; however, parents also act as the primary guardian of their children’s health.
It is valid that governments should assume the onus to tackle the problem of child obesity. In fact, what states can do is enact laws and policies which promote a healthier lifestyle in place of a sedentary one. Therefore, children have to comply with these regulations and make alterations to their bad habits. For instance, the Vietnamese government has recently released a policy requiring schools to provide students with wholesome meals and offer them a wide variety of physical activities apart from obligatory studying curriculum. As a result, the obesity rate among Vietnamese students has a tendency to significantly decline thanks to less sugary food and drink.
Nonetheless, parental intervention plays a vital role in reducing the possibility of ailment associated with an unhealthy lifestyle. As a matter of fact, it is parents that have the privilege to monitor their offspring’s diet and commitment to exercise. If they neglect this obligation, their children are likely to remain long-term obese and have poor health on account of the shortage of outdoor activities and unhealthy dietary habits. For example, parents, these days, tend to encourage their children to take part in weekly exercise programs, which can assist children in developing their physical health and not be greatly influenced by a sedentary lifestyle.
In conclusion, it seems to me that parents should take accountability for guaranteeing their children’s dietary habits notwithstanding the government’s policies in curbing the obesity rate. Besides, children should strike a balance between exercise and eating.
- Schools concentrate far too much on traditional subject which do not adequately prepare students for the realistic demands of modern working world To what extent do you agree or disagree 62
- People believe that individuals who make a lot of money are the most successful Others say that those who contribute to society like scientists teachers are the most successful Discuss both and give your opinion 73
- The line graph reveals information on Wool Price in New Zealand over a period of 20 years from 1980 to 2000
- 1 The chart below gives information about the amount of time children spend with their parents 56
- The graph below shows the number of passenger railway journeys made in Great Britain between 1950 and 2004 5 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, nonetheless, so, therefore, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as a matter of fact, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55629139073 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10160810036 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586092715232 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6648261697 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.857142857 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8571428571 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131212137503 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480901535261 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0291313736223 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0851128266052 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272320092138 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.