You should spend 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Most people do not care enough about environment issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
In contemporary society ,there has a growing controversy about the environmental protection. Many adopt the view that although environment play a crucial role in social development, many people are not concerned about environment. From my point of view, I partly agree with this phenomenon and will give explanations for both polarization.
Obviously, there are several demerits for this problem when it comes to environment. First and foremost, The people who have the awareness of environment protection take minority over the world. This is because people think government and authorize will take care this issue lead to people have a subjective thought of preserving environment. Moreover, people think environment problems will not have affect society for another 50 years. In fact, recent studies have shown that forest fires in over the world have increased over 10 years because of the global warming.
On the other hand, there are merits of this phenomenon can not over looked. Firstly, Thanks to internet, young generations have much better understanding of the problems through information and evidences. For example, The youth are taught and prepared on pollution compared to the previous generation which help to widen their awareness of environmental issues. In addition, many people who can saw the problems, their fundraising for charity and utilized it for protecting environment and endangers. In addition, A lot of primary schools, now are teaching children about environment pollution which help them raise their awareness of environment protection.
In conclusion, the fact that people have rights to care or do not care about this issue. Personally, while I agree with the idea that protecting environment which it bring a lot of benefits for the mother of nature and also I will eliminate some ideas about this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, look, moreover, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40830449827 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95240275573 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546712802768 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6756508579 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.2 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22185701505 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812402822628 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614429345056 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152629410867 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599442438477 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.