Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In this day and age, people believe that they bought somethings new because of persuading by watching advertisements, while others think that the popular advertisement made they feel boring. In my opinion, I strongly support the former statement and following essay will go into details of both views.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why people skip advertisements in few seconds in stead of watching all the clip. The main reason is that it makes people feel annoying and boring. On YouTube and Spotify have advertisement before playing a video or a song which made people feel irritating. To illustrate, some people listen the music, while working or learning, to improve their concentration, but when a song over maybe before the next song, they will hear advertisements which interrupted their collection knowledge. Moreover. there are many advertisements on television, which reduce the number of viewers. People occasionally watches their favorite programs on television to entertainment, but nowadays in stead of watching television programs, they have to watch advertisement. Advertising repeats several times, which extremely annoying for watching.
On the other hand, advertising plays an indispensable role in the campaign of selling. Advertising will compare their product with other goods, which helps consumers given the best choose. To illustrate, Toyota was compared their new cars with their older car to show the benefits of new car which persuaded customers buy new cars. Even if people do not know it, these messages are repeated several times and it may brainwash people to finally go out and get the product. For instead, if a person is watching television and seeing a several advertisements of snack, they will be starving hungry and will go to supermarkets to buy it.
In conclusion, although there are common advertisements making people feel boring, advertising is one of the best way to persuade customers purchase goods and services.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'instead of'?
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...levision to entertainment, but nowadays in stead of watching television programs, they have...
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Suggestion: advertisement
...atching television and seeing a several advertisements of snack, they will be starving hungry ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, may, moreover, second, so, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35256410256 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03713592202 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573717948718 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6068221018 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.333333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237578829053 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878532766004 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039760506597 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159892683018 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193599445925 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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