Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child s success in school.
There are several factors that affect children's maturity in the developed world of today. People consequently believe that outside influence outweighs parental influence and that only two factors parents and outside pressure play a significant role in a child's development. Although both strategies have convincing arguments, in my opinion the first approach makes more sense.
To be clear, the only factor that has a significant impact on children is their parents. The first place that children learn positive behaviors and habits is in their families. It is simple to teach children the appropriate manners when they are young. Although some families have two incomes and are unable to spend enough time with their kids, they still maintain control and are able to guide their offspring in the right direction. Since it is obviously crucial for parents to raise children who will contribute positively to society, I agree that their influence is undeniable and that they can influence adolescents more easily than other pressures. Otherwise, Scion will be influenced by others and unable to control their habits.
However, kids spent more time outside, and it is undeniable that they are subject to peer pressure and pick up different habits from others. Their development is significantly influenced by social networks and schools in particular. Children spend almost a half-day at school, where there are various students, personalities, and cultural influences that affect children's maturity. Children can be encouraged easily delinquency or drug addict by others in absence of adult supervision. Besides, teachers have a great impact on children`s nurture because children are taught ground rules, and even they can be role models for students, however parents cannot be replaced completely by teachers.
In conclusion, parents are the only notable people who play a more important role than others, despite the fact that teenagers are frequently subjected to outside pressure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, first, however, if, so, still, in conclusion, in particular, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51791530945 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82641948309 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5667752443 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0358598941 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.933333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4666666667 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157090909102 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513439150254 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563863004515 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106257435946 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220776431428 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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