The diagram details the process of making leather products

Essay topics:

The diagram details the process of making leather products.

The flowchart shows the process in which leather products are made.
It is clear that there are eleven distinct stages in this process. It starts from the initial drying of animal skin to the eventual production of leather products.
At the first stage in leather products manufacturing process, animal skin is collected from different animals to be dried well. The skin gets transferred by transport cars to factories to get transformed to leather in the following stages.The skin gets washed well in a deep basket by water and lime. Then, the skin which has been washed well, is soaked in lime. After that in stage six, it gets flattened by a special and a huge machine.
At stage seven, it is soaked again in water and vegetable matter for tanning. In the following step, the leather produced becomes polished. The leather is transported again by transport cars. It is taken to factories to produce leather products. Thanks to this long process, many leather products are produced such as bags and shoes.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 239, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...rmed to leather in the following stages.The skin gets washed well in a deep basket ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then, well, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 840.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91228070175 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55972066805 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538011695906 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6380860534 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.0 112.824112599 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.25 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 5.23603664747 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246681661618 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106112374851 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0915938255158 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198608484984 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721180567952 0.0819641961636 88% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 61.2550243902 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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