some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
some people agrue that learning about other subjects, instead of they give all their time and attention to learning for a high qualifity. In my opinion, subject have both positive and negative effects which will be discussed in this essay.
On the one hand, this tendency comes with two advantages for subject. Firsly the a few college students have much vision. This is mainly because they studies a lot of subjects and have experience. For example they are student. However they have experience who know trendy market. When they create new goods who sales many producet and learn money. As a result they will possibly rich when they are good vision. Secondly the university students would possibly have success because they know multidisciplinary and outdo colleague. For this reason they are likely to better than their life.
On the other hand, this phenomenon creates two disadvantages. In my opinion, subjects have negative effects which will be discussed in this essay. To begin with many college graders save time and money because they learn speacialized subjects would possibly rich. For example the university have tution fee and each student lose fours years for learning college, while if they studies major subjects, who will lose two years and they have soon job and become rich. As a result the specialized help their have work and soon rich. In addition they would possibly respect because they have matter skills and high status, while everybody can learn their. Therefore they are likely to enjoy and respect.
In coclusion although subject has many disvantages, there are number of positive effects that should be taken into accouny.
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- It is better for college students to live far away from home than live at home with their parents 56
- some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 56
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Some
some people agrue that learning about other ...
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Suggestion: the; a
...with two advantages for subject. Firsly the a few college students have much vision. ...
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Line 2, column 151, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'study'
Suggestion: study
...uch vision. This is mainly because they studies a lot of subjects and have experience. ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...perience. For example they are student. However they have experience who know trendy ma...
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Line 2, column 308, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a sales'.
Suggestion: who is a sales
...endy market. When they create new goods who sales many producet and learn money. As a res...
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Line 2, column 349, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ho sales many producet and learn money. As a result they will possibly rich when t...
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'study'
Suggestion: study
...ars for learning college, while if they studies major subjects, who will lose two years...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'jobbed'.
Suggestion: jobbed
... will lose two years and they have soon job and become rich. As a result the specia...
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Suggestion: addition,
... help their have work and soon rich. In addition they would possibly respect because the...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...tatus, while everybody can learn their. Therefore they are likely to enjoy and respect. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11439114391 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43793340508 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523985239852 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2229245146 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.9473684211 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2631578947 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.31578947368 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223526302166 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778484923846 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736807453482 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169045466059 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119532528435 0.056905535591 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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