Nowadays, it is increasingly more difficult to maintain the right balance between work and the other aspects of one’s life, such as leisure pursuits with family members. How important do you think this balance is? What are the reasons that make some people think that this is hard to achieve？
Over the last decade, the matter of work life has aroused a growing controversy. While some people adhere to the belief that maintaining balance between work and life might have demerits, I would lean towards the idea that keeping the right balance could provide more benefits. In the next paragraphs, I will outline the most significant reasons for upholding this standpoint.
Apropos of work-life situations, the distinguishing features of life improvements would positively influence increased productivity, meaning that recreational activities and leisure time are vital elements. Furthermore, family gatherings could be largely attributed to mental health due to some determining factors. For example, recent practical experiments conducted by some pioneering scientists have revealed that keeping in touch with nature and living life to the fullset would produce satisfactory outcomes. Hence, it is evident that work-life balances could be highly credible.
Nevertheless, a dramatic increase in overworking is closely associated with being too busy, which might have several repercussions. Such a strong association contributes significantly to either family conflicts or health issues. As a notable example, research findings in the field of sociology have demonstrated that the negative aspects of financial problems not only culminate in difficult economic situations but also trigger unintended consequences. Therefore, it is logical to deduce that work- life imbalances could prove the premise of living a stressful life.
In conclusion, after weighing up both strengths and weaknesses, I firmly argue that the disadvantages of maintaining the right balance between work and life would pale into insignificance when compared to the advantages. Although there is valuable evidence supporting the ignorance of life imbalances, some potential impediments also should be noted.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1207.87684729 135% => OK
No of words: 273.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.95238095238 5.00649968141 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17148433253 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 139.433497537 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 379.143842365 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3042055974 50.4703680194 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 104.977214359 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275903587386 0.242375264174 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874902662576 0.0925447433944 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583183094493 0.071462118173 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163930751744 0.151781067708 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050410355098 0.0609392437508 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 12.6369458128 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.78 53.1260098522 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.23 11.5310837438 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.98 8.32886699507 132% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 55.0591133005 198% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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