Some people think that in order to prevent illness and disease, governments should make efforts in reducing environmental pollutions and housing problems. To what extent do you agree to disagree with this statement?
There are different viewpoints regarding avoiding disease and infection. Some people demonstrate that governments must concentrate on reducing pollution and addressing accommodation issues for dwellers, I believe that there are many crucial aspects such as medical improvement should be considered.
To begin with, environmental pollution indeed is leading to severe health diseases. Presently, humans are badly affected by the large amount of carbon footprint released by manufacturing factories; this emission contains a lot of bacteria and they are the main cause leading to illness. In addition, homeless people are confronted with plenty of hazards when sleeping on the streets. For example, research has indicated that sleeping in public places such as parks would result in getting sick from the germs outside. Therefore, governments have to be responsible for these problems and take steps to eliminate them. Forcing big factories to recycle their emissions before releasing them and building more community houses for homeless people are potential remedies for these issues that they should consider.
Nevertheless, other fields like nutrition and healthcare services are playing important roles in inhabitants’ strength. Although laking of nutritious meals are crucial reason leading to a lot of health diseases such as obesity; currently, many people are choosing fast food due to its convenience. Furthermore, healthcare services are often ineffective and outdated in developing countries, where the number of illnesses is highest. For instance, studies conducted in 2018 showed that 80% of health diseases could be easily cured if patients have modern medical treatments. Thus, authorities must improve their healthcare facilities to ensure their citizens’ well-being and raise cognitive about the importance of having a healthy diet and lifestyle through advertisements or posters.
In conclusion, pollution around the world is a serious problem that must be handled. Nonetheless, a lot more crucial aspects should not be overlooked.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 265, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to fast'
Suggestion: to fast
...ty; currently, many people are choosing fast food due to its convenience. Furthermor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, nevertheless, nonetheless, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1760.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.84717607973 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01095669185 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651162790698 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1635888336 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.333333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151843671225 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486899365325 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397999943833 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951915992228 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412398550327 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.65 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.