In some countries people spend long hours at work. Why does this happen? Is it positive or negative development?
Nowadays, individuals tend to devote an extend time at their company. In this essay, I will discuss some specific causes of this phenomenon and why I believe that this situation is a negative development.
It is true that people can gain several advantages if they spend the whole time of their life for working. One of the discernible one is promotion purpose. Indeed, by taking more hours in the workplace, employees may enhance their working performance, which lead them to higher position so the staffs will be enjoy a good lifestyle. Another benefits is the government can collect higher amount of tax revenue. Indoubtedly, when the turnover of the firms is increasing, the company owners might contribute an enormous amount of tax to the national budget. As a result, the authorities will have sufficient finance to allocate to other necessarity areas, such as: education, science and technology development.
I hold the believe that if many prefer spending hours for occupation rather than their family, they may face on some negative influences. The crucial reason is the lifestyle can cause several health conditions for the staffs as their eyes frequently face to the computer screen, therefore it will trigger physical and mental conditions, such as: eye-strain and stress. Furthermore, the tendency can create distance between each family menbers. Indubitably, by staying too much on the company, parents may have limited spare time for their older generation and children. Consequently, the family circle cannot tighten and children are easily to be negative members in later life.
In conclusion, I believe that adults are spending a plenty of time at their company because of the promotion perspective and earning money for specific needs and I reaffirm that the trend is a negative development because it can cause some health conditions to individuals and prevent them from spending time with their family.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
Nowadays, individuals tend to devote an extend time at their company. In this essay, I...
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Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
...njoy a good lifestyle. Another benefits is the government can collect higher amoun...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...nce and technology development. I hold the believe that if many prefer spending hours for ...
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Line 3, column 12, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
...and technology development. I hold the believe that if many prefer spending hours for ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26298701299 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82710561223 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577922077922 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.0797286478 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.785714286 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18028992946 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527740032492 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670665792688 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120006840137 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541218559101 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.