Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Imagine a childhood filled with the responsibility of caring for a beloved animal The question of whether children have pets is not merely a matter of preference But one that delves into the realm of emotional development responsibility
And family dynamics.
Some people think that keeping pets is good for children and it teach them Parenting and taking care of and responsibility for another and while making
Them learn companionship and become more social and studies shows that Children who are born into households that have pets have more emotional stability And are more dependable
Usually people like to have furry animals like dogs and cats some prefer dogs Over cats because they are more lively creatures and are good for protection Even in the past people used them for keeping the herds of cattle from being Eaten by wild animals
But people who prefer cats tend to have easier time to raise them due to the Fact that they are quieter and smaller overall making them easier to raise inside a Tiny apartment while dogs need more space because they are larger
but pets is a larger concept because it also includes fish and lizards
and hamsters.
While others think it is dangerous and unhealthy
Because animals are brainless creatures so they could harm the children
While also harming themselves
Sometimes young kids harm animals by mistake in the context of playing
With them making the pets retaliate making both partys injured and Developing a trauma for both of them
And pet usually cause a lot of mess and you should clean up after them
Exposing kids to microbes endangering Their immune system making it unhealthy.
I think kids having pets pros outweigh the cons and children should Have pets
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: Whether; The question whether
...sibility of caring for a beloved animal The question of whether children have pets is not merely a matt...
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Line 3, column 65, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'teaches'?
Suggestion: teaches
...eeping pets is good for children and it teach them Parenting and taking care of and r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98625429553 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41490062312 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508591065292 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 72.0 20.2975951904 355% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 307.368264465 49.4020404114 622% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 362.75 106.682146367 340% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 72.75 20.7667163134 350% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.38176352705 342% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272342010841 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158242583243 0.084324248473 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540368016675 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105058735923 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133670019248 0.056905535591 235% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.4 13.0946893788 293% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -1.6 50.2224549098 -3% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.4 11.3001002004 278% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.85 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.57 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.8 10.1190380762 304% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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