The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The two maps compare the changes of road access around the city hospital between 2007 and 2010.
Overall, it is clear that bus stops besides the hospital road changed into bus station. Moreover, there are more roundabout build around the city hospital and the car park was depart.
According to the maps, there are 6 bus stops between the hospital road and in front of the city hospital in 2007. However, in 2010, the bus stops changed to bus station and connected with roundabout in front of the hospital road.
As can be seen from the maps, staff and public car park used together in 2007, which divided into two places. The public car park located in the right sides of the hospital and the staff car park was in the right corner in front of the hospital. Also, we can see there are two roundabouts built in 2010, which connected the ring road, hospital road and city road.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...he city hospital between 2007 and 2010. Overall, it is clear that bus stops besi...
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...y hospital and the car park was depart. According to the maps, there are 6 bus s...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'buses', 'busses'?
Suggestion: buses; busses
... According to the maps, there are 6 bus stops between the hospital road and in ...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'bus' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'buses', 'busses'.
Suggestion: buses; busses
... According to the maps, there are 6 bus stops between the hospital road and in ...
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...undabout in front of the hospital road. As can be seen from the maps, staff and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 739.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64779874214 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18473583884 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 75.0 106.607317073 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471698113208 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 206.1 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 14.1928679272 43.030603864 33% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.375 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210204255847 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119413835735 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0907570487536 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168250945689 0.15604864568 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0852383242864 0.0819641961636 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.47 8.06136585366 80% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 40.7170731707 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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