The pictures below shows the process of making smoked fish Write a report for a university lecture describing the process below
The diagram illustrates the comprehensive process involved in producing smoked fish from fresh raw fish. Overall, the procedure consists of ten distinct stages, beginning with the capture of fish and culminating in their sale.
Initially, fish are caught from various sources and immediately frozen. Subsequently, the frozen fish are thawed and immersed in fresh water for a five-minute cleaning process. Following this, the cleaned fish are eviscerated and soaked in a saltwater solution, which includes a yellow dye, for 30 minutes. This brining stage not only preserves the fish but also imparts a characteristic color.
After brining, the fish are removed from the solution and subjected to a smoking process for 30 minutes, enhancing their flavor and extending their shelf life. Once smoked, the fish are packaged, and these packages are placed in cold storage to maintain freshness until they are ready for distribution. Finally, the packaged smoked fish are distributed to various outlets for sale.
In conclusion, the production of smoked fish is a meticulous and multi-step process, involving careful handling and preparation at each stage to ensure the final product's quality and safety.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1022.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52432432432 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87011248103 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632432432432 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6798262328 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.2 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23202467281 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097701075046 0.103423049105 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538032388748 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144721708235 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248031374406 0.0819641961636 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 11.4140731707 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.93 8.06136585366 136% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 40.7170731707 184% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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