It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?
There is a saying ‘Without risk you cannot promote neither in your private life nor in professional life’. According to some if a person wants to extend his/her life he/she should take risks. In my opinion, this challenge has more advantages for people who want to change their lives.
On the one hand, there are lots of reasons that people don’t take risks in their lives. Although they know this way can improve their quality of lives don’t have any tendency to do that because most of them fear the routes and obstacles ahead. For instance, a person who doesn’t have much money and any financial support never choose a work such as a vehicle deal because it needs a huge investment and you have at least ten years an experience in it. Hence, there are not lots of people who take risks and become a successful person in their personal lives. Getting risk is a double-edged sword if you fail in your risk loss everything that you have but if you win you can have anything.
On the other hand, at work, and in your career always you want to take risks in any aspect of your work. This makes you get promoted and improve your skills. For example, when the employer suggests an awesome work opportunity that you don’t have any information and experience about and you have doubt accept or not. In such situations, if you are a timid person never accept because you always stay behind your fear and don’t make progress in your professional life. Some else who accept have this chance to show themselves to their boss and employer if so they might be promoted in their job which is grateful for them. Thus, the risk is so important and has a long-lasting effect on your professional life.
In conclusion, some people do not like to take risks anymore and they want to continue their boring daily lives. Not only is taking risks necessary in both private and professional life because enhances your quality and reveals your abilities but also, you have become a knowledgeable person who has lots of experience and can consult with other people who want to choose this way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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...her people who want to choose this way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, thus, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 24.0651302605 216% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65675675676 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41570978428 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475675675676 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2145513722 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.6875 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8125 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366243453775 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139291802991 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763226072974 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250508886654 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526776179798 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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