People nowadays sleep less than they used to in the past.
What do you think is the reason behind this?
What are the effects on individuals and people around them?
People nowadays sleep less than they used to in the past.
What do you think is the reason behind this?
What are the effects on individuals and people around them?
Experts widely concur that people should strive for a consistent eight hours of sleep each night. Nevertheless, the actual situation frequently differs considerably from this ideal. Many people are experiencing reduced sleep durations, leading to a variety of concerning consequences. This raises the question what factors contribute to this sleep deficit, and what are its implications for both people and their communities?
A significant portion of the responsibility for the current sleep crisis can be attributed to modern technology. The blue light emitted by smartphones and other electronic devices signals to our brains that it is still daytime. Consequently, engaging with these devices in bed can hinder our nervous system's ability to recognize that it is time to rest. Additionally, the structure of our work and educational systems plays a crucial role. Society is largely organized around early rising, and those who do not achieve sufficient sleep often find it challenging to awaken at dawn.
From people standpoint, not enough sleep may lead to various health problems. Sleep plays a crucial role in bodily recovery and the integration of daily knowledge, highlighting that regularly not getting enough sleep can result in numerous health issues. Additionally, the effects are not limited to the individual, the most serious outcome can be fatal. Statistics highlighting the considerable number of deadly accidents attributed to fatigued drivers underscore the wider societal consequences of insufficient sleep.
In conclusion, the prevalent issue of sleep deprivation among many people can be attributed to the pressures of modern life and the technologies we depend on. The evidence strongly indicates that this lack of adequate sleep presents significant dangers and requires prompt action.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on individuals and people around them? Experts widely concur that people should...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55115511551 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00590319878 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610561056106 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7154977874 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4444444444 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416308636515 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137211875868 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.175462549825 0.0667982634062 263% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.286571484092 0.151304729494 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.200100179883 0.056905535591 352% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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