Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
It is said that many people support alternative medicines and treatments instead of prescription ones. I believe this development is negative to some extent.
On the one hand it is understandable why alternative medicines are supported by people. With the introduction of new technologies, such as the internet, individuals have become more health-conscious and search online for information about different diseases and treatments. This trend can be seen as positive, as many people learn how to maintain their health. They are taught about home remedies and herbal treatments, which can be safer and cheaper than chemical medicines. The traditional medicine can be useful and better for some curable diseases because such medicines do not have active ingredients which can have some side effects.
However, we must consider that traditional and alternative treatments are not applicable to all diseases. Due to a lack of medical knowledge, people may endanger their health by failing to understand the underlying causes of their illnesses. For example, COVID-19 can start with symptoms resembling a simple cold. If individuals rely solely on home remedies and herbal treatments, they risk allowing the virus to infect their lungs, potentially becoming victims of this fatal disease. Additionally, most people are unaware of the correct dosages they should use. Overuse of alternative medicines can lead to drug poisoning. As a result, most of the time the conventional treatment is prioritized, as doctors know better how to guide people about diseases.
I believe that using alternative medicines can be beneficial as long as they are used under the supervision of doctors. The advantages of prescription medications should not be underestimated, as they can safeguard people's health against many dangerous diseases that alternative treatments may not effectively address.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, for example, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5979020979 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16714707237 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566433566434 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.1515769555 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0625 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4375 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233884532718 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832357836624 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492597974793 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168597655695 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635529443549 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.9 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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