Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in the countryside. What problems are caused by this issue? What can be done to solve this situation?
Nowadays, most young adults travel to cities and towns for a commodity study or more job opportunities. However, the main issue associated with this practice, is that the elderly parents are left alone in the village. This essay will discuss problems caused by young generation moving to towns and solutions that might tackle this problem.
To commence with, the main problem caused by transferring their regions is the modern lifestyle in the city. In other words, many people in their old age become unable to take care of their own. For example, mall clinics in most villages are at least 30 minutes away by car. A growing number of researches show that youth are searching for the latest education and career. This issue brings troubles for urban areas as overcrowded places. For instance, with the increasing number of migrates in a city, people cannot find houses to stay in easily and it will also cause price inflation. In addition to, it will a big loss in farming field.
On the other hand, to solve this problem the government ought to create more opportunities and higher education for the young generation in rural places. Also, they can insist big companies to make branches in the countryside by providing subsides. Moreover, governments should provide more facilities and services for its habitants such as good schools, transportations, and build hospitals. These steps become a reason to overcome these problems.
To sum up, mainly people migrate in big states for better and modern facilities as well as good future. This causes some negative aspects in cities and the government should start working on solving this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, well, at least, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, in other words, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08088235294 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62736752684 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610294117647 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4169912636 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.375 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244794511913 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728862710926 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728993788869 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157685477848 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057823300992 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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