You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
In some countries university students live at home with their family while they study, whereas in other countries students attend university in another city.
Do you think the benefits of living away from home during university outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
It is obvious that in some nations post graduate students live with their parents at their place duriing the time they study at unitversity. In contrast, those in other countries move to another city to pursue their learning process. This essay will discuss both its pros and cons , then state my oppinion.
On the one hand, attending unitversity at one's hometown with their beloved parents and siblings is of some benefits. The first benefit is that the students themselves can live and study at their own conveniences such as cheaper lliving cost, easy transportation. Moreover, they don't need to care about cultural conflics, Therefore, they are not suffer from tension any more. In addtion, they have chances to close to their family and friends and receive their support when needed. All of which are of great help to their academic performance. This later helps them a lot in their career.
On the other hand, choosing another country for the higher education is also a great option. By doing that, students have opportunities to develops their necessary skills such as time management skills, conflict solving skills. They are able to become more independent and self-esteem. In addition to achieving academic degree, students can enrich their knowledge about traditional custom, make more friends and enjoy freedom on their own. However, there are still some disadvantage of living far from home such as the feeling of loneliness esspecially when students are down ore sick, the high cost of living, the pressure form peer and study as well.
In conculsion, from the above analysis, I am of the opinion that depending on what university you choose, which major you prefer and whether you study near or far, just be opsimistic about the prospect of future life, you can make use of positive aspect from even the worst situation.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 281, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ssay will discuss both its pros and cons , then state my oppinion. On the one h...
^^
Line 3, column 43, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... the one hand, attending unitversity at ones hometown with their beloved parents and...
^^^^
Line 3, column 346, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'suffered'.
Suggestion: suffered
...tural conflics, Therefore, they are not suffer from tension any more. In addtion, they...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 140, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: You might need to use the base form of the verb here: 'develop'.
Suggestion: develop
...ng that, students have opportunities to develops their necessary skills such as time man...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 41, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...In conculsion, from the above analysis, I am of the opinion that depending on wha...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, well, in addition, in contrast, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06578947368 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58810044387 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.5906483433 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.666666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2666666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387242512648 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102272917599 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058913820621 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211429613801 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288762788704 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 281, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ssay will discuss both its pros and cons , then state my oppinion. On the one h...
^^
Line 3, column 43, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... the one hand, attending unitversity at ones hometown with their beloved parents and...
^^^^
Line 3, column 346, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'suffered'.
Suggestion: suffered
...tural conflics, Therefore, they are not suffer from tension any more. In addtion, they...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 140, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: You might need to use the base form of the verb here: 'develop'.
Suggestion: develop
...ng that, students have opportunities to develops their necessary skills such as time man...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 41, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...In conculsion, from the above analysis, I am of the opinion that depending on wha...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, well, in addition, in contrast, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06578947368 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58810044387 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.5906483433 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.666666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2666666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387242512648 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102272917599 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058913820621 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211429613801 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288762788704 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.