The advanced medical technology have a responsibility to human’s life expectancy. Do you think it is a blessing or a curse?
In this modern era,there is an ongoing deliberation among people on the corelation between medical technology and human life expectancy. While some people argue that the disadvantages of advance medical technology outweigh the advantages of the of it, on my point of view medical technology positive affect on human's life expectancy. In this essy, I shall discuss on the factors effecting on this matter while discussing both sides of the argument.
First and foremost, there are myriad of advantages of advanced medical technology such as finding medicines for diseases. For instance, vaccination courses helps people to prevent from dangerous diseases. Moreover, these medicines will also help to improve the life quality of people on the universe consequentely making an impact on the demographic issue to the governments.
On the other hand, medical advancements will increase the population in a rapid manner creating issues such as ageing population. For example, governments have to spend more money on the medical requitrements of this population together with providing allowances to the elderly population who do not have a proper income source.
In conclusion, it is recommended governments to invest on medical sciences to improve the quality of life of their population. It is also believed, that governments should plan pension plans to the elderly population in order to mitigate their expenditure on them which has an adverse effect on national income.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1252.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 228.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49122807018 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03479615271 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0896211898 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.2 104.977214359 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 7.25397266985 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241558733204 0.242375264174 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930271513965 0.0925447433944 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886435583885 0.071462118173 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128094899921 0.151781067708 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750865765511 0.0609392437508 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 12.6369458128 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 53.1260098522 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 11.5310837438 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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