With the advent of Internet age, increasing number of workers are doing their jobs from home and communicating with their office through Internet. Known as telecommuting, this trend is expected to catch up with most office workers in the coming decades.
How is the trend likely to impact society and the way we live and work?
Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations.
It is irrefutable to say that internet plays an essential role in our life, rather we are working any where but without internet no field is working independently. Some people think that with the advent of Internet age, increasing number of workers are doing their jobs from home and communicating with their office through Internet. Known as telecommuting, this trend is expected to catch up with most office workers in the coming decades. In my views, I support these features of internet.
Firstly, people are feeling relax with the help of internet, It gives an easy life to people. In future, people can work from home due to internet, so, they have no need to spend long hours in the office. Moreover, they will give proper time to their children and no need to send them in creches. Furthermore, people will avoid traffic due to working at home because they have no need to go for office.
In addition, by these techniques they have full time to manage their family and no need to take worry about the boss, because they are working independently.
In conclusion, already some people are working from home nad with the help of internet another will also like to do job from home.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 99, Rule ID: ANY_WHERE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'anywhere'?
Suggestion: anywhere
...role in our life, rather we are working any where but without internet no field is workin...
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Line 2, column 95, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'In the future'?
Suggestion: In the future
...ernet, It gives an easy life to people. In future, people can work from home due to inter...
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Line 3, column 44, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...addition, by these techniques they have full time to manage their family and no need to t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, in addition, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 982.0 1207.87684729 81% => OK
No of words: 208.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72115384615 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52707235246 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572115384615 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 379.143842365 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5561527728 50.4703680194 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.25397266985 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.431631299374 0.242375264174 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191044231276 0.0925447433944 206% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.228517832903 0.071462118173 320% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258010651121 0.151781067708 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.250150581521 0.0609392437508 410% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.5310837438 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.32886699507 88% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 55.0591133005 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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