These days, there is substantive controversy among individuals regarding telecommuting. The vast majority of people opine that it s a trend now for working and changes the way how we live and work. However, others refute this supposition and thinks that it has adverse ramifications. These essay will elucidate all the pertinent points of view to come up with a logical conclusion.
Firstly, Telecommuting is now a trend due to the works that are offered nowadays. Most jobs can now be done only using your personal computer or laptop and an internet connection. At the same time, Your everyday cost will lessen since you do not need to commute to go to the office and you can work comfortably because you are in your own home. To cite a prime example, There are a lot of my office mates that are offered with a work from home type of job and they immediately grab the opportunity since they want to be close to their family everyday. Thus, telecommuting is becoming a major trend.
On the other hand, Some employers don't want to propose telecommuting with their employers for various reasons. Examples are that they want to observe their employee personally, they want to have meetings personally and at the same time the nature of the business is private and it is a risk when the data of the company leaks out. For an instance, We cannot work from home in our company since all of the information that we are handling are private since its about the details of our customer. Hence, telecommuting is not good for other companies.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that telecommuting is a great opportunity in the future but with the right company and job since there are work information that you cannot bring at home.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 543, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...e they want to be close to their family everyday. Thus, telecommuting is becoming a majo...
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Line 5, column 35, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...d. On the other hand, Some employers dont want to propose telecommuting with thei...
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Line 5, column 395, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...not work from home in our company since all of the information that we are handling are pr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, regarding, so, thus, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 20.9802955665 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 301.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75083056478 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77258399248 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548172757475 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 467.1 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8784061852 50.4703680194 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.142857143 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187386871686 0.242375264174 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584822147914 0.0925447433944 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460467394963 0.071462118173 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109389028802 0.151781067708 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357833852177 0.0609392437508 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 11.5310837438 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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