Any recent Invention that you think proved beneficial or detrimental to society
In today's world where we witness revolutionary technological changes that happen every day to make our daily life better, the invention of Smartphones is one of those recent inventions that has influenced many people's life. Nowadays, it is inevitable to use the smartphone as this invention of technology has become an integral part of our life. This essay will further discuss more of the invention of the smartphone and its implication to human society.
Firstly, the advent of the smartphone gave new possibilities to get connected with people globally. Smartphones are now capable not only to answer or receive calls but it also let us stay connected to the global network with the help of the Internet. Furthermore, these types of phone are capable enough to process information more efficiently than the traditional computer does. Hence these all feature in phone proves to be beneficial for human society that no one can avoid.Thus this recent invention proved to be beneficial.
Secondly, the smartphone has occupied not only our personal but also our social life. The addiction of the smartphone as poses detrimental effect such as being less interactive with the surrounding, social behavior restricted to smart devices and so on. This detrimental effect has also been seen apart from the benefit it has provided with the invention of the smartphone.
Overall, the recent invention of the smartphone has provided not only the benefits but also a detrimental effect on human society. As the smartphone invention brought numerous ways to ease our daily life one might appreciate the invention that is made.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, thus, apart from, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 261.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22222222222 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90718011936 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5478733869 50.4703680194 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.583333333 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.25397266985 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19143318553 0.242375264174 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719817373221 0.0925447433944 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750007124713 0.071462118173 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121992338874 0.151781067708 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366327518913 0.0609392437508 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 12.6369458128 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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