Climate change.
It is undoubtedly true that humanity faces several catastrophic problems but utmost threat is climate change. The global warming is elevating the earth surface temperature at an alarming rate which consequently increase the ocean’s water level and will cause devastating impacts on every living species on earth. This problem is not confined to a specific location and has become a world priority.
At the outset, myriad conspicuous reason can be brought to elaborate that the rise in temperature is because of industrialisation. The limitless emission of carbon dioxide and greenhouse gases from factories are major source in acceleration of temperature. The exceptional rise in temperature will eventually melt the ice burgs and glaciers and will damage the ecological system. The Deforestation in order to accommodate the human necessities is another major issue that is also contributing in the rise of temperature.
To combat with this significant problem, there are potential future solutions to mitigate the impacts of global warming like afforestation. Planting new trees can reduce the amount of carbon dioxide in atmosphere. The government should legislate the laws to limit the carbon emission and facilitate eco-friendly industry.
Taking into account and precisely analysing the facts, I would like to recapitulate that government as well individuals need colossal and collective efforts to eradicate this problem on permanent basis.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 381, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... and will damage the ecological system. The Deforestation in order to accommodate t...
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Line 4, column 203, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dicate this problem on permanent basis.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1239.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 218.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68348623853 5.00649968141 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20821962709 2.71678728327 118% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651376146789 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1272768464 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.636363636 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8181818182 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 7.25397266985 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0684629328947 0.242375264174 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0289088783333 0.0925447433944 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0914179001338 0.071462118173 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0366883618404 0.151781067708 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063546106754 0.0609392437508 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 12.6369458128 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.81 53.1260098522 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 11.5310837438 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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