Company Top level Authorities should or should not take employees suggestions or ideas to take any decisions. Discuss
Decision making not only requires the collection of facts and data, it demands a real experience of the situation and empathetic approaches; it is only feasible if employees are involved in the decision-making process because being a part of the organization they have more reliable data on workforce issues.
Organization is a group of people who direct their actions towards attainment of a common goal; therefore middle and low-level employees can provide more efficient solutions or decisions which will enhance productivity because higher level people generally have less penetrating data on actual alternatives out of which a best can be selected in decision-making process effectively by the employees.
Most of the time employees feel left behind and compelled by the decisions imposed by the higher authorities on them and sometimes that decision is not even practical which leads to wastage of man force. For instance, during my clinical practice as a nurse, our manager initiated half hourly rounds in patients’ room at night which wasted nurses’ valuable time of actual interventions and made patients so restless and sick that hospital stay time increased and brought negative outcomes which could be avoided if nurses could have involved in the decision making process.
In short, including employees in this process will also motivate them and make them feel significant in the organisation which in turn will fortify better mutual relationships and uphill struggle. However, the decision should be made finally by the managers but acquiring employees’ opinion will enhance implementation and fruitful outcome of the decision.
- Nowadays people spend too much time at work to the extent that they hardly have time for their personal life Discuss 84
- Many young people get married before finishing their study and establishing a good job. To what extant do you agree? Please explain. 77
- In some countries around the world, voting is compulsory.Do you agree with the notion of compulsory voting?If it is compulsory in a democratic society, what conclusions can we draw about ‘Nature of democracy?’ 88
- It is argued that getting married before finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 88
- In a war of ideas, it is people who get killed”. Does a common man suffer from a group’s ideology? Express your opinion, and support the same with reasons and examples. 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ata on actual alternatives out of which a best can be selected in decision-making...
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Line 5, column 558, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ded if nurses could have involved in the decision making process. In short, in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, so, therefore, for instance, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 254.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56692913386 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10667592498 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625984251969 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6551724138 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.5024630542 205% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.2196954138 50.4703680194 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 235.666666667 104.977214359 224% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 42.3333333333 20.9669160288 202% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 7.25397266985 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0660687942312 0.242375264174 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0401727547497 0.0925447433944 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0308301165064 0.071462118173 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0420904585973 0.151781067708 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218576325493 0.0609392437508 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.0 12.6369458128 206% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 20.39 53.1260098522 38% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 10.9458128079 190% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.91 11.5310837438 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.69 8.32886699507 128% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 55.0591133005 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.94827586207 297% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.3980295567 181% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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