computer and online games should not be allowed in schools while studying.

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computer and online games should not be allowed in schools while studying.

Submitted by Trish_25 on Sun, 04/28/2019 - 21:22

Times are changing rapidly and so are the long-held of modern Computer games in schools. A recent controversy that has further flared up among elites and intellectuals is all notions is whether computer and online games should be banned in the school, while some claims that it is advantages for students. Before I came to any conclusion, I would like to shed enough light on both views in forthcoming paragraphs.

Personally, I prefer to keep up a mixed stance of significant in school's computer games not be allowed.
To start with it must be acknowledged that negative impact, but the most important is that online games such as waste of time and lack of exercise to the body, For example, students don't have enough time for study and obesity among students. Children not spending much time with families.

However, the above discussed that convincing advantages, I feel compelled to consider the strong role students can get knowledge in the students, For instance, some online games stimulate students brain and students ability in computer field boost up. A recent survey conducted by Cambridge University confirmed that is 25% a most. This evidence declares loud and clear that online games not good for brain and health can't go overlooked.

It indeed goes without saying that health and waste of time towards in students, but dominance influence of health concerns should not be ignored at any cost.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, while, for example, for instance, i feel, such as, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1184.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 234.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05982905983 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67306923691 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606837606838 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.9654986207 50.4703680194 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.4 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.25397266985 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294442743765 0.242375264174 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106594596084 0.0925447433944 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102065006352 0.071462118173 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162731989156 0.151781067708 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0864014131134 0.0609392437508 142% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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