Cultural shock is a new worrying concern for few immigrants.What are the few possible options to eradicate this?
Cultural shock of immigrants has become one of the most debatable issues among people from all around the world. Immigrating to another country is one of the significant life-changing experience. This essay will discuss the most worrying concerns and steps to eradicate this issues.
To begin with, Culture shock happens when a person moves to another country and experience a new culture. There are a number of ways to deal with culture shock. First and foremost is, find our own sacred place in that country, it will help to recharge the mind and shut everything out. Second is, Write a Travel blog, which is a good therapy for relaxing the mind and pass it in an e-support group. Thirdly, Travel to new places in that country, it helps to meet new people, see new thing and culture, and get good experience from different people.
Furthermore, Culture shock is a feeling of anger, anxiety, loneliness, confusion, detachment from reality, and fatigue. In addition, it is a psychological phenomenon that is experienced by people moves to another country for work or study for an extended period of time. Another way is, learn as much as possible about the new country when we move, keep in touch with family and friends, we should respect the new culture and accept it.
In conclusion, Culture shock is not a big issue when people move to another country, we should accept and adopt the new culture and it will release from the bad effect of this issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, second, so, third, thirdly, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1214.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 251.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83665338645 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5792682221 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557768924303 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4960874213 50.4703680194 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.166666667 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.25397266985 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229727952086 0.242375264174 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862623814519 0.0925447433944 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590065436492 0.071462118173 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144055127864 0.151781067708 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0132109910202 0.0609392437508 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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