Do you think consumer should avoid over packed products or it is responsibility of producer to avoid extra packaging of products?" Give your views or any relevant example with your own experience.
In this competitive world, it is an undeniable fact that over packed foods are promoted by companies to lure the customers. However, the main question is who should take the responsibility to avoid the over packed products, is it the consumer or the producer? This essay will discuss why consumer must avoid buying over packed products available in the market.
Firstly, over packed products are less environmental friendly. The packing of these products are mostly in the form of plastic and it takes enormous time to recycle these packages after the usage. Although the producers assert that the products are over packed for safety reason, but these packages harms the environment more than benefitting anyone. For instance, a basic household item like electric toaster is packed with fancy cover merely to attract the customer. Hence, over packed products must not be entertained by consumer as they are less environmental friendly.
Secondly, over packed products are less economical due to the excessive cost incurred in packing these products. Clearly, It will proved to be expensive for the buyers as the extra cost of packing will be included in the price of the product. Extra cost can be saved by avoiding over packed products and invested wisely in other products. For example, the fancy packaging of perfume cost extra while purchasing perfumes. Therefore, over packed products are less economical and needs to be avoided.
In conclusion, this essay discussed why consumer must avoid buying over packed products as they are less environmental friendly and less economical. In my opinion, consumer must avoid buying over packed products for their own and environmental benefits.
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- Do you think consumer should avoid over packed products or it is responsibility of producer to avoid extra packaging of products?" Give your views or any relevant example with your own experience. 70
- Do you think consumer should avoid over packed products or it is responsibility of producer to avoid extra packaging of products?" Give your views or any relevant example with your own experience. 72
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: prove
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 270.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71782461625 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488888888889 0.580463131201 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 452.7 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.3951876456 50.4703680194 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.4 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.25397266985 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330538677817 0.242375264174 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143447882879 0.0925447433944 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626957769244 0.071462118173 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230517070496 0.151781067708 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0204397322878 0.0609392437508 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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