1. Do you think consumer should avoid over packed products or it is responsibility of producer to avoid extra packaging of products?" Give your views or any relevant example with your own experience.
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is the packed items which are widely available in the shelves of every supermarket. There is widespread worry that it would only lead to myriad of concerns for our society. In my opinion, this apprehension is warranted and merits serious considerations.
There is a deluge of arguments in favor of my response. The most preponderant ones are the effects on our ecosystem because of over packaging of products, as consumers dispose packing leftovers in the garbage and most of it can’t be recycled or reused. Moreover, a recent research by national geographic revealed that most of world’s oceans, lakes and water reservoirs are getting contaminated and dirtier because of pile of leftover of food and other packaging which are not soluble or biodegradable. Therefore, needless to say that all these demerits have a far reaching impact on the world.
Another pivotal aspect of this argument is about health, it has also seen that packed items such as packed food in tins causing health concerns. A recent study suggests that canned food item are the major reason behind food poison and cancer in most of the patients in US. For that reason, it is apparent that why many are not in favor of the packed products.
In view of the arguments explained above, I pen down saying that over packed items are not only costly but causing huge damage to our society, thus, the impacts are too dire to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'recent research'.
Suggestion: recent research
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, so, therefore, thus, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1226.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 248.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9435483871 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74511201199 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592741935484 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7645548901 50.4703680194 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.454545455 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5454545455 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 7.25397266985 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0859452891641 0.242375264174 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0293080636994 0.0925447433944 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319746827785 0.071462118173 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0515015247787 0.151781067708 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180835362668 0.0609392437508 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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