Do you think consumers should avoid over packaged products or is it the responsibility of producers

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'These days'?
Suggestion: This day; These days
These day there is on debate between people about...
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Suggestion: While
...rs should avoid over packages products. while it is claim that it is responsibility o...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...outweigh the advantages. In this essay, i shall explain my point of view by analy...
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Suggestion: There
...nalyzing both sides of the argument. there are several reasons why consumers shoul...
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Suggestion: It
...e of them is that security of consumer. it is also argue that responsible of consu...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'argued'.
Suggestion: argued
...s that security of consumer. it is also argue that responsible of consumer. it should...
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Suggestion: It
...lso argue that responsible of consumer. it should also be taken into account that ...
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Suggestion: While
...about the consumers who works there. while there are strong argument on both sides...
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Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
... argument on both sides of the case, my personal opinion is that consumers should manage whateve...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...manage whatever they have on their mind.I would strongly recommend that they shou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, if, so, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 8.36945812808 12% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 879.0 1207.87684729 73% => OK
No of words: 173.0 242.827586207 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08092485549 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.92707691288 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55797164791 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 139.433497537 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583815028902 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 379.143842365 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.5344155445 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.9090909091 104.977214359 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7272727273 20.9669160288 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 7.25397266985 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267837504107 0.242375264174 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101899429207 0.0925447433944 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0927559392758 0.071462118173 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159856306628 0.151781067708 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716065320489 0.0609392437508 118% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 55.0591133005 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 200 words wanted.

Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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