The environment we are living in is in danger due to various problems. What are the underlying causes? Who do you think should be responsible to solve it? Is it the governments, organization or each individual?
Our environmental habitat and living have been under a shockingly bad shape. Though many environmental experts are trying to remedy the problem, the grim issues seem to be unsolvable individually and need an urgent action from multiple authorities. It is believed that there are numerous reasons which are causing this atmospheric phenomenon, hence in this essay I will bestow the main causes as well as pointing out the appropriate authorities who can save this problem.
To begin with, the first and foremost cause of this current environmental problem is the rapid development of many factories such as car, planes and computer. Though those technological advancements are considered useful for our well-being, they come at a huge cost for our sustainability. Furthermore, due to the fast pace of society today, vehicles and other transportations have contributed badly to our natural habitat. The inevitability of new technologies is undeniable beneficial, however governments and appropriate organisations should carefully scrutinise this trend of development.
Moreover, each of our individuals must also take full responsibility for this phenomenon by acting clean and responsible in order to protect our planet and our future generations.
In conclusion, although the underlying issues are far more dangerous than we initially imagined, I strongly believe that if we can unite the world and work together, all the atmospheric and negative phenomenon will be tackled easily.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 225.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62666666667 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33135941555 2.71678728327 123% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.697777777778 0.580463131201 120% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.1023527349 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.666666667 104.977214359 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3333333333 7.25397266985 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140945367955 0.242375264174 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518084133772 0.0925447433944 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328289114296 0.071462118173 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0847901262958 0.151781067708 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028252924885 0.0609392437508 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 12.6369458128 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 53.1260098522 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.9458128079 141% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.67 11.5310837438 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.32886699507 123% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.0 Out of 90
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