Experience is a more effective way to teach rather than books. Do you really agree or disagree?
A famous adage ‘Experience is the best teacher’ still proves its truthiness. Indeed, books offer a world of knowledge that any wise man would wish to possess. Whether the experience is a more effective way to teach rather than books is debatable. This essay will discuss, the advantages and drawbacks of the given topic and lead to a plausible conclusion.
On the one hand, there are myriad reasons which proponents cite in favour of books reading. One of the most preponderant reasons is the ocean of knowledge that a man can acquire through the experience of highly acclaimed writers. For instance, the famous south Indian movie director Maniratham claims that being an avid reader is a major reason for his success as a film-maker. Not only, books offer a world of knowledge, but also it makes a man wiser.
However, the abundance of knowledge one can gain through books will not make him successful unless and until he possesses enough experiences. To illustrate, according to a recent article on most influential people around the world by Times Magazine, it is evident that the most important reason for their success is their own experience. Therefore, practice and experience play a major role in building one’s own success.
In conclusion, no matter how much knowledge one gains through reading books, it is his own experience will decide his success or failure. In my opinion, the experience one gain through practice will outweigh the knowledge one acquires through reading books.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 170, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whether” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hat any wise man would wish to possess. Whether the experience is a more effective way ...
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Line 4, column 259, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dge one acquires through reading books.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, still, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12145748988 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87248604104 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587044534413 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8534957072 50.4703680194 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3076923077 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.25397266985 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117026255967 0.242375264174 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543193081171 0.0925447433944 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11663007307 0.071462118173 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0777630219023 0.151781067708 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733776155473 0.0609392437508 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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